Post-Conference

I conferenced with Crystal and it really did help. I was writing on too much of a personal level when i should have been doing it more in third person. She also suggested to use more .org or .net websites. which i have taken into consideration and added some sources with that. I also needed to fix my parenthetical sitations which i have already changed. I appreciate all her help and hope i understood everything we talked about.

My Topic

I have decided i want to something on the soldiers in Iraq. I don't really know exactly where to go with it though. I want to let people know about the psychological problems the soldiers are having. I would also like to let people know about http://soldiersangels.com/ . It's a great volunteer organization that helps out our soldiers. The program doesn't help them physically but it does help them out a little mentally. I have found a couple of eye opening websites such as http://www.antiwar.com/casualties/ . I find the topic of Soldiers very interesting and would like to research it further.